Some people argue higher taxes should be collected from industries causing higher industrial pollution, whereas others argue that there are better ways to deal with it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that a growing number of industrial companies nowadays. Many people think that government should impose a high level of taxes on companies causing pollutants, while others claim that the other effective measures. In this essay. I would like to take these views under consideration and provide my personal opinion.
On the one hand, there are certain benefits of getting more taxes from polluting industries. The first is that tax revenues can be allocated to other fields such as education, environment, health care and so on. For example, in currently, people are facing many incurable diseases such as Corona Virus. Thousands of people die of this epidemic. Therefore, the sate can fund for vaccination Covid 19 and equip with modern medical infrastructure to meet the need of people. In addition, by paying more taxes, many facilities become responsible for protecting environment. In particular, many facilities are discharging toxic chemical waste into rivers, is causing global warming. This lead to a rise in sea levels. Thanks to paying more taxes , a huge amount of contaminants will be cut down.
On the other hand, it is believed that there are some the other effective measures. First of all, national and local authorities should require all business to comply with emission standards. For instance, if any facilities break a rule, government should impose heavy fines on it. However, government should also provide favourable conditions for the operations of companies conforming to the requirements. A second measure would be encourage factories invest in environment-friendly technologies such as water treatment system or using biodegradable plastic. From this solution, reducing the waste and garbage they release.
In conclusion, although there are certain benefits when adopting some other measures on polluting industries . In my opinion, I still put more weight on collecting more taxes not only deter companies from polluting but also contribute to develop other sectors through taxes revenues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45079365079 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0149445162 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6949228214 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7619047619 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7619047619 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21873962047 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555108647919 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456967943227 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140322324172 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442852410537 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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