Some People Say That The Best Way To Improve Public Health Is By Increasing The Number Of Sport Facilities. Others, However, Say That This Would Have Little Effect On Public Health And That Other Measures Are Required.
Public health is a controversial and sophisticated issued that general population are facing nowadays. While some individuals belive sports amenities may enhance community health, I am in favour of the view that sports centers bring about little result on public health and health education is the most effective solution to apply.
On one side of the argument, advocates of this claim that sports facilities is beneficial to promote their health. Firstly it is undeniable fact that community health is greatly enhanced since the number of devices have been increased significantly. Consequently, it can build up resistance for residents to avoid illness such as diabetes or cardiovascular disease. Secondly, sport is the key to release stress levels and mental illness. Recently, the vast majority of inhabitants have a sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions. Thus, community should make exercise a regular part of our lives rather than using technology devices.
On the other hand, I maintain that a sports clubs is futile and raising public awareness though health is more valid to execute. This might be explained by the fact that health amenities is only suitable for the already fit. Instead of increasing and upgrading sports facilities, the authority should organize health campaigns or educated resident basic knowledge about health. For example, the state should disserminate information about adverse reactions of smoking or excessive amounts of alcohol and encouraged citizens to opt a healthier lifestyle.
In summary, although I acknowledge that many individuals agree with the view health center would be adbantageous to strengthen global population health, I would argue with the view that raise societies awareness is a visable solution to execute.
- Some People Say That The Best Way To Improve Public Health Is By Increasing The Number Of Sport Facilities Others However Say That This Would Have Little Effect On Public Health And That Other Measures Are Required 79
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required Discuss both view and give your own opin 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56985294118 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94290160803 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9063027408 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304004396875 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095624958101 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768224004798 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173176274265 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634864351637 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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