You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Jameson,
I am in dire need of your help with regards to a computer course I wish to apply for. Although, I have never been officially enrolled in any classes teaching computing, but I would like to apply for an intriguing course.
I am not allowed take that course because I do not fulfill the pre-requisite for the same. The electronics have always fascinated me and I have learnt the techniques in my own way without any help, as I didnt even have time in between my part-time jobs to support my education. Due to which I am not certified enough to take this advanced course.
This course will be really helpful for me in terms of my future prospects and will help me upgrade my skills. Hence, it would mean a lot to me if any special recommendation was made for me in this critical situation.
Kindly request to revert me back at the earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Mia thompson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...es in my own way without any help, as I didnt even have time in between my part-time ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5987654321 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7035698146 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4735622797 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7777777778 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150206524799 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524284409465 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474466368298 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830919605469 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618551995134 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.