It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since human is a social being finding reliable and close people has always been a crucial part of our living. An opinion exists that a good blood relations are able to replace any friends giving the person all the benefits of the latter. Although, I agree that life without friendship is hard life without family is not possible.
On the one hand, friend is the one whom you have chosen according to the common hobbies and interests. Being on the same wave-length is the very thing that matters for the comfortable relationships between people. As a rule communicating with full fellows brings nothing but a stress or even anger. For instance, due to the “World” journal surrounded by the like-minded ones almost 80% of human beings feel calmer and happier. Hence, owning a real friend with the same vibes is the way to calmness and a good mood.
On the other hand, family always plays crucial role in individuals life providing with proper help and support. Owning a good family is a gods gift ensuring us with confidence and sense of security. Generally, loving relatives make an effort to encourage and cheer their kinsman in the most difficult situations. For example, my accountant Matvey is the lucky one with the excellent family and as a result he does not require any friends attention. Thus, a good family is a great happiness providing a person with stability and instant help whenever possible.
To conclude even though friends with the same hobbies guarantee an interesting pastime family gives a feeling of complete confidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... person all the benefits of the latter. Although, I agree that life without friendship i...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
... friend is the one whom you have chosen according to the common hobbies and interests. Be...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e-minded ones almost 80% of human beings feel calmer and happier. Hence, owning a...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ucial role in individuals life providing with proper help and support. Owning a g...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions. For example, my accountant Matvey is the lucky one with the excellent fami...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'friends'' or 'friend's'?
Suggestion: friends'; friend's
...and as a result he does not require any friends attention. Thus, a good family is a gre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96551724138 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66161387684 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605363984674 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.306952714 49.4020404114 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21061241049 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658909858062 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414340162655 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116136860413 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262739397495 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.