Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of time to do what they want. What is your opinion?
Some people show their preference for seasonal occupations and spend the rest of time following their passions. While I suppose this trend has manifold disadvantages, It is my contention that job hopping should not be underestimated.
On the one hand, non-permanent jobs have a multitude of drawbacks. Firstly, there is little room for doubt that it is a task of challenge for co-workers to get promotional opportunities in their career when they have short-term occupations. An explanation is that they could have a shortage of knowledge and professional experiences and also put their job stability in jeopardy. Secondly, it is likely that temporary workers have lower salaries than permanent one. Therefore, they could struggle to improve the standard of living which is deemed to play a vital role in their lives.
On the other hand, employers could derive multiple advantages from job hopping. To begin with, it stands to reason that momentary employment gives individuals the opportunities to pursue their passions. Accordingly, job hopping acts as an incentive for people to put their potential to maximum to have great work performances. Furthermore, temporary employers could have better understanding of various different realms. The reason is that they have much time to enrich their knowledge and get exposed to an array of hands-on experiences.
In conclusion, despite considerable disadvantages of temporary work, I subscribe to the opinion that people could gain a host of benefits from this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...term occupations. An explanation is that they could have a shortage of knowledge ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i suppose, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42616033755 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17664078277 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6447326756 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213242209786 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755345465377 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378725772378 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126791354679 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173834491685 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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