Write a letter to your friend, who lives in another town, and invite him/her to a party you are going to organise.
In your letter, explain:
why are you holding the party
who are expected to be present at the party
invite your friend and give directions on how to get there
Dear Vini,
I am very happy to share this good news with you that Aru and I have been blessed with a baby boy on 19th of October 2020. On this merry occasion, we've planned to throw a big party, so that our little one gets everyone's good wishes and blessings.
I had plans to invite our professional social group as well but Aru was keen on keeping this party more intimate hence only family and friends are expected to be there. Do you remember Tejal and Kavi? They too will join us in our celebration. There will be cake, music and great food by Relish caterers.
I am not taking no for an answer and would love for you to come to this function. It's going to be a get together just like old times and I'm really excited! You can take 391 bus number right outside airport arrivals and the driver will drop you infront of our house. We are located at Punjabi colony, Bhandup; it's right next to Sai baba mandir, the big orange building.
Can't wait to see you.
Yours friendly
Manjyot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
...f October 2020. On this merry occasion, weve planned to throw a big party, so that o...
^^^^
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... love for you to come to this function. Its going to be a get together just like ol...
^^^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... a get together just like old times and Im really excited! You can take 391 bus nu...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...ba mandir, the big orange building. Cant wait to see you. Yours friendly M...
^^^^
Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to see you. Yours friendly Manjyot
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41935483871 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11322468758 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.741935483871 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.512637233 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7272727273 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168229381895 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659762908752 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719404185895 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772683646925 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406557124745 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.