ou are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Asiya,
I'm excited to let you know that I'd be travelling soon to Canada to persue my higher studies.
Recently, I received the offer letter from Humber College stating that my classes shall begin from this fall at the end of September. I've managed to get a seat in Urban planning batch of M.Arch degree. This means that we will get a lot of time to spend together. My classes function only on weekdays from 9 am to 12pm and there are no lectures on weekends.
Because I will have ample time, I wanted to look for a part-time job. Even though I will carry few funds to survive there; I was wondering if you could help me find a decent place to work. It would really help me pay all the bills like house rent, groceries, telephone and electricity.
Our common friend Josh told me that you worked part-time as a waiter in many restaurants for almost two years. I'm sure you must have good rapport with your managers given your extrovert nature. If you could put in a good word for me that would be great!
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Lots of Love,
Alex.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Asiya, Im excited to let you know that Id be trav...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...iya, Im excited to let you know that Id be travelling soon to Canada to persue ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...from this fall at the end of September. Ive managed to get a seat in Urban planning...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Arch
...get a seat in Urban planning batch of M.Arch degree. This means that we will get a l...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... many restaurants for almost two years. Im sure you must have good rapport with yo...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Love seems to be countable; consider using: 'Lots of (Love)'.
Suggestion: Lots of (Love)
...ng forward to hearing from you soon! Lots of Love, Alex.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27103500634 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1013699415 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0909090909 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246553847923 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812908788952 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061475272728 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124663761825 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790058105658 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.