Choose 1 of the following questions.
1. IELTS-essay: the qualities that make someone admirable
2. Free-style: My idol / role model
3. Free-style: Someone I admire / An influential person
It is obvious that the obstacles are always put on our path. The challenges often make us down and even give up. However, there will be someone lightening our life, inspiring and guiding us to the right side. Our Listening and Speaking lecturer at my university played this essential role in my life, so he is my most admirable person.
First of all, his absolutely obvious thing making others admire is his extensive knowledge and experience. He used to study abroad in the United States and he has been teaching at my university for over fifteen years. In my opinion, his English speaking skill is the most noticeable strength. This is because I love his American English accent, which sounds really natural and native. He gave us a variety of methods to expand our speeches and make them much more convincing.
In addition, he is a dedicated lecturer. He said that his desire was motivating his students and directing their English abilities, even their grammar in speaking. Whenever, he gave us a comment on our speech. He helped us recognize our positive sides first and then how to improve our negative ones. As a result, after working with him for a semester, my English speaking skill became much more improved and I am more confident than I used to be. Beside helping us with our speaking abilities, he is always willing to do us a favor with any academic issue being under his control. Thanks to this feature, he helped me a lot in my study in spite of his busy schedule and stressful workload. For example, I usually ask him about new vocabulary items in reading texts, which are not described and explained understandably both in the dictionary and on the websites.
In a word, my Speaking and Listening lecturer is considered my life - saver due to his abundant help with my academic study. Additionally, he has been my inspiration to become a professional English teacher in my future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, so, then, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78181818182 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71788831216 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9756308301 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0526315789 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0874121383458 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300499655864 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387439544011 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738552807835 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454155365547 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.