Many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and chemicals. What are the advantages to this? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern world, people have been having to deal with a host of issues, including food and diet. There is a widely held belief that there are preservatives and chemicals in fast food. Within the scope of this writing, some positive aspects of processed foods and ready-made meals are discussed, and from my perspective, the adverse effects of the trend outweigh the benefits.
To begin, the main advantage of processed foods and ready-made meals is convenience. In other words, some busy people like travelers or official workers usually do not have enough time to prepare food and cook meals. Therefore, eating fast food cannot only save their time but also keep them from starving and provide their body with nutrients. For example, Oatta 1-minute breakfast, which is combined with several oats, is a famous ready-made meal to help busy people have enough energy during the morning without getting up early and spending a lot of time cooking.
However, I am of the opinion that aforesaid positive aspects are at the expense of more significant drawbacks. Some processed foods and ready-made meals lead to some matters. This is because these often contain preservatives and chemicals, causing overweight and cancers. To illustrate, according to the American Journal of Clinical Nutrition, if people consume fast food regularly, they will be up to two-thirds more likely to die of cancers, so people are encouraged to cook easy meals instead of eating fast food.
In conclusion, although processed foods and ready-made meals may make human' lives more convenient, they usually fail to bring about a healthy lifestyle. Therefore, I firmly believe that the limited benefits of the trend hardly compensate for the negative aspects and people should balance their diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, third, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20979020979 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65844658704 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1005521539 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2818612729 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110249126049 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100931818438 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166829906717 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417032488275 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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