Write a narrative essay about an interesting place village city you have been to

Grammar and spelling errors:
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I still remember the trip to Dalat the m...
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...o brings me a lot of joy and nostalgia. 2 years ago I had a trip to Da Lat city ...
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...e so excited that I can still feel it. Everything is attractive and poetic.I ha...
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... Everything is attractive and poetic.I have seen flowers everywhere, all the t...
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...l the time, even in a crack of the wall.I also lost my way and when I asked the l...
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...here makes me love this place even more.The landscapes of this fog city such as Gol...
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...mson berries are extremely attractive. When I sat at the coffee shop with my fa...
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... immersed in the music and romance here.By the time I left, the scent of flowers a...
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...Da Lat was holding on to my footsteps. To this day, I still remember the feelin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23151125402 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21927298542 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536977491961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8283495472 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.8095238095 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0616228517986 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195088447177 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390634493306 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397021467815 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373302638125 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 13.0946893788 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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