Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
University education attracts many people. It's become a trend these days. While some argue that the sole purpose of higher education is to improve job prospects, others argue that the sole purpose of higher education is to improve job prospects, others argue that it also benefits society and individuals.
I can not deny the fact that one of the main goals of university is to get a better job. A diploma is required in many companies. Through the university training process, students are equipped with foundational knowledge suitable for the positions that companies recruit. The salary for the job received is also higher.
However, there are other benefits for individuals and society. Firstly, Going to university makes students more independent. They will enter a new threshold where they develop life skills. For example students have to live away from home while going to university and they have to get used to everything where they stay in hostels or dormitories. Secondly, going to university is also beneficial to society. The University trains people who will later help the society. As a result, the country's economy will grow. In addition, present day society is very competitive, so university training produces people with specialized knowledge bases to meet the needs of society.
In conclusion, in addition to the goal of getting a good job, university education has further benefits. Because talent is the future of the country, education and training contribute to making the country more civilized and developed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29674796748 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80373783824 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9326762178 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6470588235 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28863461067 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881059385891 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650370423772 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168520561498 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161731616716 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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