Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your opinion. (Write at least 180 words.)
Today's critical issue is determining who has the most impact on children. Although many people feel that family has the greatest influence on young adults, a substantial proportion believes that friends influence young adults. As a result, before making a decision, each point of view must be considered. On one side of the debate, many believe that the benefits of the family to young adults much exceed the drawbacks. Parents are, first and foremost, the first teachers of their children, and they raise them to shape each child's personality. Most youngsters, for example, tend to emulate the acts of adults. Hence, the family has the biggest effect on children, thus parents should act responsibly in order to provide a good example for their children. Others, on the other hand, feel that friends are the most significant individuals in young adults' life. To begin, when children go to school, they are exposed to a wide range of personalities and are taught in a number of ways. Friends may influence how we think, live, and learn. They will accept change more quickly than their parents anticipate. Overall, it is apparent that both sides have some intriguing points of view. Nonetheless, I believe that families should have the greatest influence on children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 848, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...e most significant individuals in young adults life. To begin, when children go to sch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, nonetheless, so, thus, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06220095694 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64682836976 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607655502392 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0027675802 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3846153846 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23824485643 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786420411621 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758604324135 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23824485643 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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