Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, the trend has been increased towards international trade. A section of the society thought that the modern technologies increased our dependence on others although others argue that it gives us more freedom. I strongly believe that it creates more dependency on others. In the course of the essay, I will discuss both sides.
To begin with, those people arguments who believe that it reduces our freedom. Before this new innovation in the modern world when travelling is a big issue from one country to other countries country At that time most of the necessaries are made in the country which gives us more economic benefit to locals. Even these days our demand has been on that stage when a country gives dictations. For example, most of the energy requirements are based on oil and the oil import from the UAE and if they stop producing oil then our system will fail.
On the other side of people that think modern innovation helps us to decrease dependence. These technologies give our alternative methods to get things which previously depend on other countries. For instance that some regions are not able to use their land for agriculture purposes but nowadays a plethora of new methods make that land accurate agriculture. Recently, cities are dependent on the villages to fulfil food requirements but now cities can produce food and vegetables in vertical forming. In my, opinion these things happen also in the early ages due to the fact this world always needs a number of things from other regions.
In conclusion, modern innovations increase demand for products from other countries although some products are decreased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ho believe that it reduces our freedom. Before this new innovation in the modern world...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...hat it reduces our freedom. Before this new innovation in the modern world when travelling is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03636363636 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64642843679 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.753805913 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262505843733 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872911352581 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750893026162 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154428574204 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578466338489 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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