The diagram illustrates how steel is rods are manufactured in the furniture industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram portrays the manufacturing process of steel rods used in the industry of furniture manufacturing.
Overall, the entire process consists of 11 steps, beginning from raw material and ending up with the inspection of the finished product.
First of all, iron ore, yellow ore and carbon are collected to serve as raw material for steel rod manufacturing. These raw materials are melted in a melting slit at a very high temperature of 1300-1500 degree Celsius. The molten raw material is then forwarded to the smelting cabin to undergo refinement. Once the process of refinement is done, the candescent metal is poured into the previously set ingot.
In the next stage, the ingots are attached to a cooling reservoir that puts the molten mass in a temperature of 60 to 100 C. Following that, the metal is passed through nozzles, casting strands of cooled metal in the process. The cooled metal is put through rollers in order to give them the desired shapes. the shaped products undergo a heat treatment from a heating machine and follows onto a measuring automaton for surface inspection.
Products that make past the surface check is then sized down, as required, using a cutter. This process is followed by the ID stamping of the products. Finally, the products go through one last step of inspection and are cleared for using in the furniture industry.
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- The diagram illustrates how steel is rods are manufactured in the furniture industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... order to give them the desired shapes. the shaped products undergo a heat treatmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00873362445 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7510570456 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589519650655 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1820120272 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2307692308 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800344701578 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329349458704 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781560774748 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737344685654 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112040804015 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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