Increase of the sea level during the last decades.
The lecture talks about sea levels increasing , nowadays there are two positions about this topic. On one side we have people who tell us that there is nothing to worry about, according to the article the increase of the sea levels is a normal process, some of us may think that the reason for this to happen is the ice melting but they explained that even NASA does not know the reason for the water increase, it just happens and it’s being happening for ever. In conclusion for these people we should not worry about the water increase because humanity will survive it now just like they did it before. On the other hand, we have the posture of people who tell us that the water increase is a real problem and if we don’t do anything about it we will lose at least 20% of the earth's land, which is really scary. According to the studies these people refer to human activities such as the burning of fossils as the reason for this to happen. If humans would not have burned the fossils, the ice that covers frozen lands would have stayed there, but now it is in the sea. They explained that if we don’t stop, the consequences will be awful for humanity. In conclusion for these people, humans are responsible for the water raising and as the responsible one we have to take actions in order to mitigate this problem. The truth is that even if we take responsibility or not for the water levels increasing we shouldn’t just ignore it because it is happening.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ecture talks about sea levels increasing , nowadays there are two positions about ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, at least, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47014925373 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33501641412 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488805970149 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1622805803 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.111111111 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11490509505 0.272083759551 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604512065859 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629197193305 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11490509505 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.0289183223 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 12.2367328918 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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