In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that there is a growing concern about adults not willing to leave home after completing education and pursuing careers. While this tendency may have some drawbacks, I believe these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, that young adults tend to make decision to continue to live with their family after graduation could leave some negative influences. To begin with, they would lack of privacy in terms of doing their favorite activities. This actively demonstrates that they need to be given allowance to do anything outside the family's intention. To illustrate, they might need to ask for parents' permission before holding a party, otherwise the parents would feel frustrated when their child behave unwisely. Furthermore, adolescents can be gradually dependent on parents in various aspects. To be more specifically, the vast majority of young adults in recent times is not likely to be fully equipped with how to cook and do laundry as they might far more depend on their parents. As a result, this may detrimentally affect their later life.
On the other hand, living in an atmosphere with parents could be beneficial in numerous viewpoints. A compelling reason is that adults might not have to concern about a great deal of fees when they move out, for instance, house rent, electricity bills and other certain types of bills. Therefore, this benefit can ease their financial burden as they have their parent to worry about this issue. Another justification worth mentioning is that, the young generation could be provided more time to easily look after their parents when having them around. To illustrate, parents would be admitted to hospital immediately, given that their child notice some health issues from them.
In conclusion, while continuing to live with parents contains some disadvantages, I firmly believe that the benefits are far greater.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-10-18 | kphuong1901 | 89 | view |
| 2023-10-18 | kphuong1901 | 89 | view |
| 2023-10-18 | kphuong1901 | 78 | view |
| 2023-07-26 | TLan168 | 61 | view |
| 2023-07-01 | hieu13092006 | 78 | view |
- Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person Why do you think this is the case What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person Give reasons f 67
- Many countries import large amounts of food from other parts of the world Is this a positive or negative development 78
- Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news However others believe that they can learn news better through other media Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems Give your opinion 56
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishments 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18954248366 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7219063913 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9357399938 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.866666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363376628495 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114307442093 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515943682402 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210696628297 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048688184754 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.