Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, Science has been burgeoning extremely rapidly. In the modern world Security is a major concern, however, advancements give us the reliability to depend on them and that makes security considerably easier than ever before. The essay will discuss the pros and cons, Although, I strongly advocate that crimes
are reduced due to the latest upgrades because those have raised the safety in life.
First and foremost, CCTV cameras have contributed a lot, for instance, people who want to commit crimes will think twice before doing any act. The thief will automatically be caught on camera and it will be much easier to identify the faulty person. Not only that but it also records the voice also so that is much helpful. As we know, a video has the power to show the mirror to the world and it can save the life of a person and if someone tries to corrupt an innocent person then footage and voice will prove life-saving and they can get justice.
Online vocations are grown and the blockchain is giving the surety
that nobody can break the online payment of any websites that are associated with it also it is worldwide accepted by all governments of the globe. Owing to incline in demand of essential needs small businesses can be grown freely as a result, consumer and seller both will be satisfied without any hesitations or any theatre of scammed or hacked money transaction. The latest things are prompting that it will be an even tedious task not only that but also it will mitigate crime rate.
On the other hand, there are a plethora of ways to do spamming for thugs. To illustrate, By creating duplicates of any popular website and giving extra discounts on it Furthermore, it attracts people to their site just for making money. In the end, they do not provide any service and cheat the public. Fake job offers are advertised to trap crowds and give some unreal notice just to obtain money.
In conclusion, technology significantly deducted crimes and increased security but it is a fact that every coin has two sides. Still, the crime rates are deducted from technology by further advancements and public awareness. It can be solved easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68862275449 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43627962773 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694610778443 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0917876951 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138182270361 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060477039555 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041414291325 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722683901475 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511195168006 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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