The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart depicts a number of recreational accommodations and facilities that are prevalent among Canadian residents, including those who were born in this country, and expatriates from English-speaking countries and non-English-speaking countries.
Overall, cinemas remained to be the most preferred place visited among expatriates and citizens. However, the ubiquity of theatres was the lowest for this matter.
As per the chart, Canadian citizens went to cinemas the most with the figure crossing the 70% mark. In addition, regarding the figures indicating the prevalence of cinemas among expatriates from other countries and those from English-speaking countries, each accounted for 50% and 60%, respectively.
Additionally, migrants born in other countries went to libraries the most out of the three groups, but in terms of zoos, this group turned out to visit those places the least. On the contrary, migrants who originated from English-speaking countries preferred zoos the most with 50%, following by those who were born in Canada of which the figure reached merely 45%. The trend is similar for theatre, topped by English-speakers from other countries and bottomed out by the migrants from other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the migrants from other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, regarding, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6902173913 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33951802976 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1838411846 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0467439644085 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257372889772 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254611574021 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0332425284057 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148509392521 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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