Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent times, it is apparent that e-commerce has gained significant ubiquity due to its convenience and exponential abundance in terms of products and price range. Although possible dangers may lurk beneath this new way of shopping, from my perspective, its benefits overshadow the drawbacks it has.
On the one hand, online shopping is more reasonably priced. One prominent justification for this is that a host of coupons and lower-price codes, including Chrome extensions like Honey, are now integrated into popular websites like eBay or Amazon, which can help buyers to save up a notable amount of money. Moreover, online shop owners don’t have to pay additional fees for property renting like their traditional store counterparts; thus, their product prices are more likely to be reduced. Another perk of e-commerce that is worth considering is that the shoppers' decisions are more independent. Take in-store shopping as example, there are some cases where store representatives follow shoppers around to provide product guidance for them. This can have some level of annoyance for buyers and affect their decisions in terms of choosing and buying products, whereas online shopping gives people total freedom to do so.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that online shopping receives several rebukes from people for its common fraud and scam incidents. This is hard to avoid since the Internet is where people rarely have a chance to use their senses to decide whether a product is worth buying or not; therefore, many scammers take advantage of this and sell unwanted merchandise.
To recapitulate, e-commerce can be deceptive and frauds may happen, nevertheless, people can be more financially benefited from it and save up a significant amount of time. Therefore, the advantages of online shopping outweigh its downsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36426116838 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86833940755 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.613795571 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171824827878 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681305363676 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476372576576 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957580528081 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342090061296 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.