Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because we do not have to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
A healthy meal plays an essential role in people’s life as it contributes a great deal to our health and our metabolism. However, a school of thought holds that being a vegetarian is beneficial to people since meat is not needed for a wholesome meal. From my perspective, this point of view is completely flawed and this paper will provide justifications for my opinion.
It is no doubt that omitting meat in our meals is not an effective measurement for a balanced diet. Since meat provides us with necessary nutrients such as protein to create muscles to strengthen up our body, it is attached much important in our daily diets. Without meat, our body cannot develop in a normal way and this can render dangerous diseases on your bones, muscles or even affect your mental health. Therefore, only consuming vegetables is not a probable solution to gain a lean body and have a wholesome diet.
Moreover, not being accustomed to a vegan diet can also lead to detrimental impacts on people’s health. If a person suddenly cuts down on their meat consumption on a daily basis, it will lead to an unexpected dizziness, a disturbing hunger annoying you from concentration or even more exacerbate, a faint. Additionally, not everyone can sustain a vegan diet due to a myriad of reasons. For example, athletes, who are in an intensive training course for competition, extremely need protein and vitamins from meat to construct their muscles, cannot get rid of meat in their meal as it would influence their training quality as well as their health.
All in all, eating more vegetables is good as they can supply you with fibre, vitamins and vital minerals for building a lean body. However, a meal with only plants and without meat is not a balanced diet which would be a menace to your health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a normal way" with adverb for "normal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
.... Without meat, our body cannot develop in a normal way and this can render dangerous diseases ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81229773463 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81575716111 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550161812298 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1329439849 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14945899334 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588240873998 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350251554205 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895861776712 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00356394438052 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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