Some people think that if a country is already rich, further economic development will not result in its citizens being any happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that citizens living in a wealthy country will not feel much happier even though that country makes further progress in its economics. From my perspective, I completely agree with this notion, and my reasons are twofold.
One primary reason is that stronger economic growth commonly results from heavier workloads. The purpose of making money is to satisfy daily necessities and have spare money for entertainment. When people have achieved these goals, they are unlikely to work harder to earn more money. But it is almost impossible for companies not to increase duties and prolong working hours while they want to have significant economic growth. Therefore, workers would have less time left to enjoy their lives outside the workplace.
Secondly and more importantly, though, the result of economic growth is not equally distributed to workers in most cases. Proponents of that money equal happiness often claim that we can have superior material lives by making more money; however, such an opinion overlooks the side effect which the problem of economic inequality might deteriorate, because the top management normally crops the fruits of success, whereas low-level employees gain little or even no change in their wages. And that is what is happening right now in Taiwan.
By way of conclusion, moderate economic development can meet people’s needs and make them feel happy, but overdevelopment would force labor to sacrifice their personal time and exacerbate income disparities. As a result, I strongly feel that it would not improve the happiness of citizens who lives in an already wealthy country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, as a result, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33204633205 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6991040576 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664092664093 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6527184442 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163909211044 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580991342557 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606795892629 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103839319842 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613890927432 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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