Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. Other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis and swimming is better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people argue that the benefits of playing team sports are much more than that of individual sports. Although there are some benefits of playing individual sports, in this paper, I will argue that team sports can provide more advantages for us, and the reason is threefold.
First of all, it is vitally important to learn how to cooperate and communicate with others no matter you are in a school or a company. These social skills can be learned from participating in team sports such as baseball, football, and basketball which involve a high level of collaboration. If someone in the team does not get along with the teammates and they always want to be in the spotlight, the whole team will not function well. Therefore, those players need not only to improve their sports skills but also to develop interpersonal skills for the sake of success.
In addition to collaboration, it cannot be denied that those who play team sports, in general, would develop a sturdy friendship with their teammates. For example, I was playing volleyball at the university where I found a feeling of belonging, in each contest, my teammates and I always got each other’s back. We together went through those tough practices and numerous combats, and sharing these memories allows us to build a sense of unity and friendship, even though we are in different places now.
Proponents of individual sports often claim that only this kind of sports can teach people to be independent because no one can rely on during the game. However, the situation also happens in many team sports that each member has their responsibility. For instance, every baseball player needs to defend a specific position and it is impossible to always count on others.
In conclusion, both sports can provide great benefits to people’s lives, but I believe that playing team sports has more advantages because of cooperation and making new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74639525408 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7134697757 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205693384155 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786515303909 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675993350376 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13084611565 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605040841664 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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