The diagrams below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location

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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

The given two diagram shows a wave-energy machine simulation and the location where its best fits. The first image showcase the internal layout of the equipment whereas, the installation area in the second one.
The first chart explains how a wave-energy machine performs. At the bottom level, wave direction is shown which will raise the water levels into the chambers and through the heavy air flow te turbine will rotate. Air flowing into the chambers from both direction, from the top of the turbine and from its below. We can also see an electricity generator on the left side of the chambers which is very high than water level.
The second one indicates about which part which be suitable for the fitment of the large machinery. The surface having low tides will cost very minimal but resulting will comparatively low. When the installation made in depth of river having large waves, it can will generate more energy though its investment is heavy.
Overall, in order to gain more energy supply, it is required to configure the equipments in heavy tide area. So as to get maximum energy flow throughout a day.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'diagram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'diagrams'.
Suggestion: diagrams
The given two diagram shows a wave-energy machine simulation ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e installation area in the second one. The first chart explains how a wave-energy ...
^^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gure the equipments in heavy tide area. So as to get maximum energy flow throughout a...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: To
...gure the equipments in heavy tide area. So as to get maximum energy flow throughout a da...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, whereas, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87434554974 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49254253531 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633507853403 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8940375585 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6363636364 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246815809225 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913662121682 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125646207942 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142338003909 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960750372584 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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