You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Several people believe that taking part in team sports such as football are more beneficial than taking part in individual ones like swimming, while others tend to disagree.
Lately, it is concluded that team sports such as football, soccer, volleyball, basketball and so on, take a lot more money to be successful than the solo sports like swimming, wrestling, shooting are. Prime example in Olympics they both get one gold medal in the end! So what is the point of investing huge amounts of money on sponsoring, making contracts with professional foreign players, paying huge bills to them as a part of the deal while a single swimmer in Olympics like Micheal Phelps can get 8 gold medals in just swimming? The answer lies within the fact that team sports have more excitement to follow up and watch than other solo sports are. It tends to take several months before the season ends, the competition is tight and even sometimes not predictable until the last match.
On the other hand, team sports are more beneficial to body because communicating to team mates subtly or not will make the brain get more organized specially facing difficult situations where there will be other team mates who back you up if you do not do well. Thus, ability or disability of one person will not affect the whole team's result while in solo sports occasional depression and subsequently messing up a final game is more probable.
While I love doing sports in either kinds, I prefer to do solo sports as I do sports to free myself of daily tensions and therefore need to be alone, not having the burden of stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, even so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75985663082 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48625672222 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0994100987 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.0 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.875 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286833242657 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137218372768 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106784484928 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19990491394 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115083772288 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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