More and more businesses and individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
Over time the technology is developing, in fact it is an integral part of life in these days. Communicating online is more popular in today’s busy life than face to face interaction. This phenomenon has plenty of merits and demerits that would be covered in this essay.
On the one hand, using internet for communicating by business sectors and individuals has numerous potential
Benefits. First of all, In a modern society everyone has access to the internet on their cellphones as most of the people are tecno-savy now a days and prefer to use technical means of communication instead of going to visit anyone physically. As a result, conversation on phone calls or text messages is more convenient for them as long as they find it effective. Secondly, People choose the way that saves money so online interaction is a cheaper source as compared to be physically. Therefore, usage of technology to communicate is much more popular among people of all ages.
Finally, While it is difficult to have a face to face connection with the people living in remote areas, internet and globalization has made it easier to keep in touch with those people, indeed everyday on video calls as it provides instant communication and it seems like physical presence. For example, students migrate to other countries for their study or work and they can connect with parents through technology. Moreover, The business meetings are held via video conferencing that saves precious time and instead of wasting time to travel entrepreneurs can focus on other important deadlines.
On the other hand, Along with various positives the technical communication has many potential downsides as well. Firstly, The communication might be interrupted due to any technical error as sometimes because of extreme weather conditions no one is able to find signal that may hinder their important discussions. For an instance, An connection problem may waste the limited time of businessman and other counterparts who are in meeting regarding a major projects. Hence, This is one of the bigger disadvantage that makes face to face meeting a better option.. Additionally, Technology is not a substitute for the physical communication as a whole because someone have to be present many times such as in banks, stores and other places that do not provide online services. Consequently, It can not be replaced completely in future too. Apart from this,If someone does not know how to use phones then he or she needs to go face to face. As a result, Despite of having technical advancements, still physical conversation is important for a few people.
To conclude, Although the trend of communication via internet has plethora of merits yet i think that it also has demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10421286031 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00521913158 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538802660754 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.070022779 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.55 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.85 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328383405193 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915957644157 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774976603587 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166454321266 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688777778842 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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