People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped?
In contemporary life, an increasing number of criminals continue to re-offend after being disciplined. This issue can be attributed to a number of different factors and I believe crime can be well stopped if we bring in more considerable efforts.
To begin with, when a person continues to re-offend despite their previous criminal records, this can be attributed to three contributing factors. Firstly, after a prison sentence, ex-criminals do not have enough typical knowledge as things tend to change fast. As a result, they cannot apply for a job due to that insufficiency. Secondly, people still have great prejudice against criminals since they are considered guilty and intimidating. With a criminal record on resume, most companies are hesitant to recruit them into working and dedicating themselves. Finally, the punishment policies of the government may still consist of many limitations. It is widely believed that the authority is too soft to prevent criminals from perpetrating unlawful acts.
To remedy this happening, several measures should be taken into consideration. Educational and vocational training can be applied for ex-criminals after their sentence ended. This method will prepare offenders with a decent education and necessary skills to have a better life without having to commit again as a making of life. Furthermore, rehabilitation programs should be provided annually to decrease the re-offending of dangerous behaviors. From a legal perspective, lawmakers need to tighten control over crimes. In closer prospect, if we have a new approach, which is containing more strict policies, the number of re-criminal can be lowered to the minimum.
In conclusion, as we witness more and more people continuing to engage in prohibited actions, both government and people have to apply thorough and feasible methods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...spect, if we have a new approach, which is containing more strict policies, the number of re-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51943462898 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12107161718 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646643109541 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.97459825 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263643042004 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780232009001 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717912461581 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16323961697 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854807501268 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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