TPO 54. The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake's water—what scientists call its salinity—has been increasing steadily for years because the lake's water is evaporating faster than it is being replaced by rainfall or rivers. If the trend continues, the lake's water will soon become so salty that the lake will be unable to support fish and bird populations. The lake would then become essentially a dead zone. Fortunately, there are several ways to reverse the trend that is threatening the lake's health.
One option is direct removal of salt from the lake's water in special desalination facilities. Water from the lake would be pumped into the facilities and heated. This would cause the water to evaporate into steam, while salt and other materials dissolved in the water would be left behind. The steam would then be cooled down and returned to the lake as salt-free water. Gradually, the high salt levels would be reduced and the lake’s overall health would be restored.
Another possible solution is to dilute the salt level in the lake with water from the ocean. Since water in the Pacific Ocean is 20 percent less salty than water in the lake, bringing ocean water into the lake would decrease the lake’s salinity. The ocean water could be delivered through pipelines or canals.
Yet another solution would be to control the lake's salinity by constructing walls to divide the lake into several sections. In the smaller sections, salinity would be allowed to increase. However, in the main and largest section, salinity would be reduced and controlled by, among other things, directing all the freshwater from small rivers in the area to flow into that main section of the lake.
The reading propose three methods to reduce the salinity of the Salton Sea to protect fish and bird population. The lecturer, however, cast doubts on all of these methods.
Firstly, the reading suggests to remove salt from the water by pumping it into desalination facilities. The lecturer, concerning on the health risk brought by it, opposes this suggestion. When evaporating water by desalination facilities, toxic chemical materials would be left. They could damage people's health when they are spread by wind and breath in.
Secondly, the reading suggests to dilute the Sea by water from the ocean. On the contrary, the lecturer point out that the government cannot pay to construct the pipe. As Pacific Ocean is 100 kilometers away from the Sea, it is not affordable to construct such a long pipe.
Last but not least, the reading suggests to construct walls to separate the Sea into different areas and control the salinity of the largest areas only. The lecturer challenge this by stating that it is not a long term solution. There are frequent geographical activities around the sea, and the walls would be destroy in a major earthquake. The water from different area would then mix together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggests removing'.
Suggestion: suggests removing
...of these methods. Firstly, the reading suggests to remove salt from the water by pumping it into ...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggests diluting'.
Suggestion: suggests diluting
...d and breath in. Secondly, the reading suggests to dilute the Sea by water from the ocean. On the...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggests constructing'.
Suggestion: suggests constructing
... pipe. Last but not least, the reading suggests to construct walls to separate the Sea into differen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 200.0 270.72406181 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.025 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6598825162 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.066538671 49.2860985944 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3076923077 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279365680919 0.272083759551 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959181680157 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897349444569 0.0662205650399 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148332048526 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736279484478 0.0443174109184 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.