In some countries, students pay for their college or university fees, while in some others, the government pays for them.
Do you think the advantages that government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages?
Paying the college and university fees by students happens in the majority of countries, whereas in a few nations government pays the money for students' academics. There is no doubt, the advantages of this activity outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will be cited some supportive reasons for my viewpoint.
To commence with, there are several pros to the government if they pay the students fees. The first and foremost is that although students completed their courses in universities through government funds, they will pay proper tax to the government when they will start earning. To be precise, learners feel the efforts which are done by their nation's government, and they will always be loyal towards their nation. For instance, an article published in 'The Toronto Star' in Canada has revealed that the Canadian government spent almost $10 million every month to help needy students because they feel those students will become assets for their nation in the future. So, the government pays the students college or university fees not only for their benefit but also for little ones' future.
On the other hand, if any country announced to pay the learners fees, they would improve their national image worldwide. It has generally been seen that spending on the education sector by a nation, is also the main parameter for checking a country's economy. In addition, countries that pay students fees faced the overpopulation problem, and it creates discrimination between nations' education systems. For example, in India, students migrated to those countries which pay for their academic expenses, and they can make their future bright. As a result, the government has to face the problem of a shortage of resources.
To sum up, the trend of paying students fees by the government has pros as well as cons, however, the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...majority of countries, whereas in a few nations government pays the money for students ...
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Line 3, column 693, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...the future. So, the government pays the students college or university fees not only for...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16721311475 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73772258755 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3368874964 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47858617033 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179537819954 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112132695928 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313606559338 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566835995571 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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