Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study
online. Is this a positive or negative development?
All over the globle, More and more schools and institutions open online coures these days. Although some people argue that there are many side effects of internet-based education, online learning has gradualy proven its promissing impact throught its flexibility and affordability.
In the first place, without moving to other country or area, people now can easily connect to lots of prestigious universities in the world by one click. In other words, with an computer and internet connection, students can enter their classes anywhere rather than moving to another city or country. Moreover, if people have a suddend affairs, they can even flexible to choose when they study without any punishment, which is almost impossible with the traditional course. An examble is that, millions of students has used some online applications to continue their study in the covid-19 pandamic which strigger strict restriction to move out worldwide.
In the second place, Not only do enjoy the mobility, people can be offered various of course with huge benifit in term of the low tuition fee and corespondent quality. In fact, students can save by 70 percent the total amount of money that thay have to spend in traditional classes and gain the same knowledge and qualification. In my experience, I did decide to join in an English online course, where I could speak freely with many international teachers and it helped me to improve subtantially.
All in all, if all the factors are contemplated, we can easily reach a conclusion that online study brings immense benifit for people, especially who are busy and have a tight-budget. Let choose some basic online court to enjoy it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, in fact, of course, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13919413919 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84309026571 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.849197984 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261670384258 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859796368828 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374280558368 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135404093227 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421890075515 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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