Some people prefer to live in a small town.others prefer to live in a big city.which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
There’s no shortage of opinion on people lives in a small town or to live in a big city.if I were forced to choose.I would definitely prefer to live in a big city.it is my firm belief that if I live in a big city it will surely be a great place for me,change in my life for a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with,I prefer to live in a big city because I was born in a small town grew up there.I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience.You see right from my childhood memories I only experienced life in a small town I studied my primary and secondary school there.I was only able to relate with the same people I grew up with only used to the same construction buildings,same environment.I wasn’t chance to meet new people and make a new friends in the small town I grew up in As a result,I lacked exposure and don’t have experience for this reason,I prefer to live in a big city.
Secondly,Apart from my childhood memories I also want to have see new places,Drawing from my own experience, I want to have my higher education university in a big city this will lead me to a new exposure it’ll enable me to have new friends,To be in university in a big city will change my orientation and have a new experience with different people. Moreover,after my studies in the university being in a big city will enable me to build my career and get a good job and live a comfortable life I dreamed of in a big city I will have chance to go to restaurants,to see movie, to go for shopping.living in a city will enable me to have a turn around story of my childhood memories with a lot of things I couldn’t enjoy and experience when I was young.As I grew up,After my studies I want to live a comfortable lifestyle.
In light of the above mentioned reasons,I strongly prefer to live in a big city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32132963989 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9315751651 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415512465374 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.1344086022 358% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.012257661 48.9658058833 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 312.0 100.406767564 311% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.2 20.6045352989 350% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.45110844103 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266629307721 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194729505603 0.076458572812 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112941208029 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229116126248 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976018207041 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 11.7677419355 297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 58.1214874552 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 10.1575268817 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.96 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.002688172 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.0537634409 306% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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