Watching a live performance such as a play, concert or sporting event is more enjoyable than the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people may believe that it is more enjoyable for them to attend a live performance rather than watching the same event on television. While there is some truth in the advantages of participating in a live event, I still believe that watching on television should be a priority.
On the one hand, going to live performances is enjoyable to a certain extent. Firstly, social people prefer to participate in such events to enjoy a feeling of togetherness. For example, when going to a concert or a football match, people can dance, interact and cheer together, which is a stimulating experience for outgoing people. Secondly, attending live performances gives the audience a chance to have personal interaction with their favorite artists or athletes. This means that people are able to express their love and admiration, even face to face chat with their idols.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why I am convinced that watching performances on television is more enjoyable. The first reason is that television broadcasts enable people to have full control of their surroundings when watching an event. For instance, watching an online concert can help people connect with their singers on a higher level of emotion because they are not distracted by the noise of excited fans. The second reason is that home viewers could adjust the position of their seat or the television to their liking, whereas in live performances people are only allowed to stay in a fixed seat. Furthermore, attending live events in a spread of covid epidemic leads to a higher risk of infection, meanwhile people could both enjoy events and asuarrance their health when watching at home.
In conclusion, despite the mentioned advantages of going to live performances, watching the same events on television is far more enjoyable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13377926421 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86722546519 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2483927627 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320960737752 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132322590519 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087160739759 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231100840565 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654264500026 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.