Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it’s a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that there is no use in reading news and watching news programs because news is irrelevant to everyday life. Personally, while there is some truth in the pointlessness of reading newspapers and watching news programs, I still believe that there is a connection between news and people’s lives.
To begin with, I strongly disagree that news does not have any connection to everyday life. By definition, the news is information about important current events and is often categorized into different topics, each of which will attract a certain type of audience. For instance, sport-minded people will be interested in reading sport news, while businessmen will be more concerned with economic news. In other words, people’s interest in various fields will always be the glue that links news with people’s lives no matter what.
There are several reasons why I am convinced that reading the news and watching television news programs are time-consuming. The first reason is that people can read thousands of articles everyday, but only a few of them help people make better decisions in their life, career or business. For example, weather forecasts or sport newsletters rarely affect most of us . The second reason is that news programs produce news in a way that usually captures the attention of viewers. For instance, shocking and scandalous news which often holds little value in people’s lives, stimulates us and consumes a large amount of our time.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the news always links with people’s daily lives. However, reading the news and watching television news programs are pointless for people to a certain extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76833444575 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.135622366 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450032854034 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18386902206 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110410251472 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316689696524 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628451443579 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.