The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures illustrate the transformation of a public park in its opening day in 1920 and today. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there are some rearrangements regarding the existed facilities and developments of new infrastructures.
Considering initially at the righthand corner of the park, in 1920, there was two rose gardens opposite each other with seats on two sides of them and a stage for musicians to perform, whereas the seats and a rose garden are now moved away, in favor of making more space to develop a new amphitheatre for concerts. While the fountain is transformed into a rose garden surrounded by seats in four directions, the nearby garden has been replaced by a cafe'.
With regard to the entrances, the park is still accessible either through Arnold Avenue or Eldon Street with a newly developed entrance for underground car park . In the east of the current central garden, the previously unoccupied land is now belonged to a water feature at the expense of removing the seats and a glasshouse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eloped entrance for underground car park . In the east of the current central gard...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, still, whereas, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96610169492 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01656098843 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.399673694 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126292765676 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691247597837 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801320946449 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926947436645 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370932791473 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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