Some people believe that population explosion is not a serious problem because the world has enough resources to support this issue.
over the past decades, their is a drastic increase in population around the globe. Few people think that growth of population is not consider as a difficult factor, hence the world has sufficient amenities to manage the consequences. this essay will briefy explains about several problems related to over population and required ground sources which we have.
On the one hand, eventhough extreme population doesnot leads to serious effects, but it has several issues relating to it. For the reason that Deforestation, pollution, in addition to Environmental disastar occur. For instance, humans heavily depend on plant extracts for their comforts, like wise they become responsible for distruction of forest. Another fact that increase in population will also leads to pollution , to illustrate this , people around the world are prone to rely badly on transportation facilities like Buses, Personal cars, and Bikes are the major sources for pollution. Because of this factors there is an extreme change in the climatic condition, due to which enviromental disastars such as Cyclones and Earth-quake are taking place.
On the other hand, it is undeniable fact that the world has enough resources to handle over populated earth. For example, there are alot of resources for increasing population to survive. As world has sufficient amount of agricultural land which ensures that the food supply for the people, it also has independency for the citizens to work, earn. even the world has wide range of opportunities for the people in every field through it people can brighten than future.
To summarise, even though population explosion deals with variety of negative effects, world has also has required amenities to ensure the peoples to survival.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36231884058 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83358272081 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6197935636 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262416845175 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899813531886 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556514022513 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155211488721 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156372821064 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.