In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages ?
In the future, all vehicles will be autonomous so passengers will be the only person inside them. Despite some benefits of it, I believe that overall the drawbacks are more significant.
Admittedly, self-driving cars have several positive impacts. Firstly, it contributes to reducing operating expenses. Transportation businesses will no longer have to hire drivers who account for nearly 50% of spending. As a result, salary payments will cut. Secondly, enterprises can spend more money enhancing the service and vehicles quality if they dismiss all their employees. This is vital to the sustainable development of a company. Consequently, they will attract many customers and acquire a reputation and credibility.
However, the above benefits are trivial than the following problems. First, autonomous vehicles cause a rise in the unemployment rate. Thousands of drivers make their living by driving when this job is redundant. They are forced to quit their job and find another one in a completely new field. The second disadvantage of this trend is that an autonomous vehicle can not replace humans in unexpected situations. It seems that a self-driving car was installed in advance and then has to follow instructions on a predetermined road. Sometimes, an urgent problem can happen, but it can not solve the problem quickly, actively, and efficiently as human beings. This issue can endanger passengers’ health and even their lives.
In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of self-driving vehicles are likely to be outweighed by their drawbacks. This kind of vehicle can develop if it can assure factors relating to safety and employment for citizens.
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- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for nearly 50% of spending. As a result, salary payments will cut. Secondly, ente...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38697318008 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09270644655 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628352490421 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3301742697 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7368421053 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211723708776 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059521770898 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931873666093 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155676100218 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941820106532 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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