Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that the major environmental problem these days is due to the extinction of particular plant and animal species. While reasons can be given to justify this, I believe that air pollution is the more important environmental issue.
On the one hand, the loss of some species can lead to several environmental problems. For example, forested watersheds improve water quality or water storage, however, their over-deforestation can cause fast floods and erosion. As a result, these disasters can pose a serious threat to human lives and surrounding animals. The loss of forested watersheds also shifts the ecosystem to a state of ecological imbalance.
On the other hand, I advocate that it is a need to consider air pollution as it is the main environmental issue of our times. There are a variety of causes of air pollution, the chief of which is industrial emissions. For instance, normally, manufactured factories need a significant amount of energy for mass production, thus they release a high number of emissions per day into the air without treatment. This activity will lead to the greenhouse effect in the long term. Secondly, the burning of fossil fuels has detrimental impacts on air quality. In the coldest country like Russia, every household has heaters that are used to burn wood or coal to keep their home warm in the winter. As a result, a high number of exhaust fumes are produced at the same time, which can be extremely dangerous and seriously harm people who are exposed, and worsen the air.
In conclusion, although the loss of particular plants and animals can be a very noticeable environmental problem, I believe that air pollution is the one that needs to tackle as soon as possible to improve the environment.
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- The charts below show the differences in how people in 3 countries learned English in 2010 and 2015
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 67
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 67
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96928327645 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95369964223 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4227557196 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211799998219 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709034905 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087787010319 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153933394312 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825208597831 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.