1. Inviting a friend
You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter:
explain the reason for the party
give the date and time of the party
suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Anita,
Hope you are doing well, we are doing just fine here. I am planning a surprise birthday treat for our very close friend of mine. His name is Arun, he is from India and currently studying English with us.
Unfortunately, Arun is unable to go-to his family this vacation as he has been assigned a special project by Mr. Dean. Though he is very excited for the project but internally he is very sad and is missing his family. As this was his birthday month and he had plans to celebrate it with his family. So to cheer him up, we have planned a surprise Birthday party for him. It would be just great if you could also join us for the celebrations, this would just make Arun more happy as you also happen to be from his hometown.
The Party is on the coming Saturday at the Starbucks cafe just near to our university. Myself and Arun will reach the cafe by 6:30 PM. You, Paul and Richard can join us by 7:00 PM. I have a small request for you, If it's not much of a trouble, can you please get a special Cake for Arun. Since I will be with Arun I won't be able to get the cake. I can Pay for the cake once we meet.
I really hope Arun loves this Party and we can cheer him up.
Hope to see you soon
Warm Wishes,
Jazz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...you please get a special Cake for Arun. Since I will be with Arun I wont be able to g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.10655737705 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09996096763 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6978929177 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.625 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193936674225 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648514493487 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490375672735 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10866182151 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501850880476 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.