The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, similarly, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 298.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05033557047 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1233031067 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540268456376 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 23.0359550562 321% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.20655492 60.3974514979 360% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 376.25 118.986275619 316% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.5 23.4991977007 317% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 7.80617977528 500% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129410614031 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892927497443 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090376167417 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892927497443 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090376167417 0.0667264976115 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.6 14.1392134831 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.83 48.8420337079 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 12.1743820225 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 11.2143820225 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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