The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The information about the number of km water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries countries " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">is depicted by line graph and table. the data has been calibrated by km.
Overall, The highest water used for agricultural purposes and another side less use for industrial and domestics. brazil was a high water consumption in 2000. and the congo was less used to brazile
In 1900, the water didn't use by sector for domestic and industrial use since 1920. there was a slight increase seen in used to water, it accounted for less than of 1000 km3. water started use use " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">500 km3 in 1900 then slowly increased in 1940 after that the graph steadily growed 3000 km3 use for agricultural purpose in 2000.
The table Presented the two different countries countries " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">brazile and congo described the water consumption in 2000. the brazil brazil " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">was used to 26500 km3 km3 " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">and176 million people use in 2000. and the domocraft congo used to 100km3 in 5.2 million of people used in 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: countries
... and water consumption in two different countries countries ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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Suggestion: Brazil
... less use for industrial and domestics. brazil was a high water consumption in 2000. a...
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...l was a high water consumption in 2000. and the congo was less used to brazile In ...
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...ess used to brazile In 1900, the water didnt use by sector for domestic and industri...
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...domestic and industrial use since 1920. there was a slight increase seen in used to w...
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Suggestion: Water
...it accounted for less than of 1000 km3. water started use use ' style='colo...
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...or less than of 1000 km3. water started use use ' style='color: rgb85, 85, 85...
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...;>and176 million people use in 2000. and the domocraft congo used to 100km3 in 5...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82075471698 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.23213898118 2.65546596893 159% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448113207547 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.469073887 43.030603864 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 5.23603664747 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178296571216 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1047236111 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737491578945 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15234354558 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671984746147 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.