In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think it is happening? How to solve this issue?
It is true that many countries have experienced the falling number of various animal and plant species. Several reasons can be identified and a number of solutions should be implemented by the government to tackle the problem.
There are two main reasons behind this phenomenon. Firstly, it seems that more and more people cut down trees to make way for farming spaces. This might lead to habitat loss of some terrestrial animal species. As a result, some animals cannot find anywhere else to live, while others find it difficult to adapt to a new environment. Secondly, the increase of water pollution currently causes severe damage to many sea creatures and plants as well. This pollution might result from residential and industrial raw sewage discharged directly into the sea. In other words, human activities can push many species to the verge of extinction soon.
However, there are some measures that could be adopted to try to protect some species from declining. The first solution would be the introduction of some strict ban on illegal activities such as over-logging or dumping untreated sewage into the sea. Those would then act as a deterrent to those who are going to destroy the natural habitats. The second solution would be running a number of environmental awareness campaigns in order to arouse people’s interest in protecting endangered animals and plants. Furthermore, the local council should encourage residents to plant trees as much as possible.
In conclusion, although the falling number of animals and plants occurs for many reasons, effective steps can be taken to reverse this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19083969466 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73042455076 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2866294863 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176292038391 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608930394496 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670677423125 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128423914119 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557114037341 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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