In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?
Recently, there has been a surge in the number of juvenile delinquents worldwide. Look at this matter in-depth, multiple reasons can be found as its root and young offenders should be punished according to their crimes’ severity but not necessary in jail
Regarding the reasons, this phenomenon is derived primarily from the lack of time spent by parents with children, leading to their shortages of knowledge and awareness. It is true that in this hectic world, many parents are too occupied with their jobs that barely can they spend sufficient time with their children to monitor and educate them properly. In addition, with the prevalence of violence on almost every kind of platform from video games to social media nowadays, they are more easily enticed to go off the track
When it comes to young people’s punishments, it should be strong but not as harsh as sentencing them in prisons. In fact, it is scientifically proved that some parts of young adolescents' brains are not fully developed yet, therefore, they may commit crimes by accident and prison may not act as a deterrence for them. Instead, the government can send them back to their families with better supervision or to some special institutions where they can point out their flaws and educate them not to repeat the same mistake again. Consequently, as receiving a second chance to turn over a new leaf, teenagers will behave better in the future
To conclude, it is a pressing issue that juvenile delinquents are witnessed with an upward trend all over the world. This can be contributed by the insufficient care from their parents that make them can not be aware of wrongdoings and as they are not fully grown-up we should not put them into jail as a punishment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91554054054 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69124047461 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3753238335 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.875 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.625 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243027281702 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937118540038 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595671978023 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140770658888 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158681903018 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.