Public places are noisy. What are the causes of this and what do you think should be done about it?
Noise pollution is one of the widely discussed issues nowadays and no one can deny the fact that public places such as markets, playgrounds are the major contributors to this environmental problem. Although people have time and again stood up for this, they are the main reason behind these loud surroundings. In my opinion, with certain laws and restrictions, the problem can be reduced. The below paragraphs will discuss the causes and ways to reduce unwanted noises.
Firstly, society is the main culprit behind noise pollution. People indulge in various activities, for example, parties, social or cultural events where they use loudspeakers to play songs and make announcements, causing an increase in noise levels. Secondly, public places have become extra crowded these days, more people means more vehicles and the honking sound or engine sound from the vehicles also contributes to this issue. Hence, directly or indirectly, human beings are the main reason for this.
Nevertheless, there are certain measures that can help the atmosphere around public places be more peaceful. To start with, the government can make some rules like fixed timings to play the music in events; the safe volume levels. Additionally, authorities can provide proper parking spaces for personal cars in marketplaces to avoid traffic in the areas that will reduce honking. Furthermore, an individual can keep a self-check to minimise the unwanted noises, thus, providing a better place to live in for other human beings and animals.
To conclude, noise pollution is not something that cannot be reduced. With proper awareness among the public about the problem and its effects, it can be controlled. Together, the government and society can make the world a peaceful place to live in.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28975265018 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72060941544 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600706713781 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9969875535 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150938332758 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529525441007 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388562558393 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994182382724 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180603299471 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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