In the world of internet, people write on internet about a product’s reviews and opinions about a service.
Is it a good thing or bad thing?
In this technology era, there are a lot reviews of products and services written by consumers. I believe that this is a benefical action to improve good quality market for society.
The review is highly important for the development of buyers satisfication. The review can prevent people for purchasing low quality products and obtaining bad treatments. From the notes that are left by the previous consumers in the product, the future consumers will obtain valuable information about the given product before they afford it. Likewise, people may also be very detail in writing down the reviews of services, therefore, the notes can also be used as an essential information to get a best treatment. In Indonesia, when people seek for a lawfirm, they usually tend to search as many as possible reviews on the internet about best legal services. As a result, an increasing satisfication occurs on the services of lawfirm in that area.
Nevertheless, some individuals might be saying that such reviews are not really crucial for the development of maketplace. In this particular group, it is believed that certain reviews are booked by the sellers. It means that some reviews are not orginally made base on personal experience when using the products, instead, it is made by the order of the bussiness owners in order to produce a good image of a product in the market. However, this is not always true. It is demonstrated by an increasing number of satisfication happened in several area of bussinesses.
In conclusion, I think a product’s review is a substantial development in the marketplace these days. Thus, more reviews are needed for better improvement in the future.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-11-24 | Revivo Tulaseket | 61 | view |
- In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest 89
- International tourism has brought about enormous benefits to many places At the same time there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages 84
- Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones Is this a possitive development or a negative one 61
- The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine Government funding should reflect this To what extent do you agree 67
- International tourism has brought about enormous benefits to many places At the same time there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 501, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...used as an essential information to get a best treatment. In Indonesia, when peop...
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Line 2, column 637, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the best'.
Suggestion: about the best
...any as possible reviews on the internet about best legal services. As a result, an increas...
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Line 2, column 753, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the services of lawfirm in that area. Nevertheless, some individuals might be ...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun area seems to be countable; consider using: 'several areas'.
Suggestion: several areas
...ing number of satisfication happened in several area of bussinesses. In conclusion, I think...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, likewise, may, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97274604896 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.323308268 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232211833455 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067778380718 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051641445328 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12325093817 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639091622778 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.