Writing task 2
We are living in a country which is developing day by day in many aspects. People are trying to cope up with the change which is for their betterment. Though, nowadays we have too many choices according to few people. I would like to illustrate my opinion for this essay in further paragraphs.
First of all it is noticeable that humans are developing different kind of technologies to make life more comfortable and fast. For instance, current healthcare services is far better than past decades because of the technology and choices. Previously, people from rural area were not able to get proper treatment in the same area, they had to visit city area. Not only healthcare service but also transportation options were rare and many people were die due to lack of choices.
The flipping side of the same situation is currently, there are various government as well as private hospitals, clinic available to cure people. Due to various options of transportation people can save the life of their loved once in less time by using ambulance, cabs or own vehicle.
Not only healthcare services but also restaurants, cloths, various products are available in market. For example, me and my friends decided to have dinner at one of the famous hotel in my hometown but, due to renovation purpose restaurant was closed besides this we decided to visit another famous restaurant nearby. In this case we had plethora of options to choose from.
To recapitulate, I am totally agree with the statement that people have too many choices these days in almost every kind of services, products and many more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
We are living in a country which is deve...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e change which is for their betterment. Though, nowadays we have too many choices acco...
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Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...days we have too many choices according to few people. I would like to illustrate ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for this essay in further paragraphs. First of all it is noticeable that human...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople were die due to lack of choices. The flipping side of the same situation ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...using ambulance, cabs or own vehicle. Not only healthcare services but also re...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ad plethora of options to choose from. To recapitulate, I am totally agree with...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... To recapitulate, I am totally agree with the statement that people have too...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92222222222 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72837299583 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7879120301 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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