The diagram below shows how the instant noodles are manufactured.
The diagram on the prompt illustrates the process of manufacturing instant noodles. The whole operating procedures, from raw materials to packaging, are dictated in the diagram sequentially. According to the chart, there are a total of eight steps in the production of instant noodles.
At first, raw materials such as oil, and flour are stored in the storage tank. Then these elements are blended with water in a mixer to make a dough and turned into sheets through the rollers. Dough sheets go towards and during this sheets are formed into strips in step 4 and then into noodles discs in the number 5 step.
After that cooking oil is sprayed on these discs. After drying the noodles discs they are poured into cups as long as additives such as vegetables and spices are included in the cups. After confirming all the ingredients and finishing the previous seven steps noodles come into the process of sealing and labeling, which is the last task in manufacturing instant noodles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...ly. According to the chart, there are a total of eight steps in the production of ins...
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Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ers. Dough sheets go towards and during this sheets are formed into strips in step 4...
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Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nto noodles discs in the number 5 step. After that cooking oil is sprayed on these di...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es and spices are included in the cups. After confirming all the ingredients and fini...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89820359281 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59935422823 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.324403694 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8888888889 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169193983118 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729091339007 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845359370903 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119800981131 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748362090856 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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