The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words
The bar graph illustrates, the export income of five products in a country from 2015to 2016. Whereas, the table describes the changes in the proportion of values over the same year's.Earnings are measured in billions.
Overall, the greatest income from exports is petroleum and engineered goods with over 55 billion each and the lowest-earning from the agricultural and textiles products with lower than 35billion. Similarly, major growth has been seen in textiles value with 15.24% among other commodities though, gems and jewellery value declined to 5.18% in contrast to previous years.
Regarding the bar chart, petroleum and engineered products comprised of more than 60billion in 2016 which is higher than the former year with approximately 61billion and 58billion respectively. Likewise, agricultural and textiles also exhibits slight increase in earnings with over 30billion by 2016. However, gems and jewellery income reduced from 42billion to just over 40billion in 2016.
In terms of changes in product category, all goods shows increase in values except gems and jewellery, which is plummeted to 5.18%. While, other goods such as agricultural products(.81%), petroleum products 3% and engineered goods 8.5% surge when compared to 2015 and 2016.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...products in a country from 2015to 2016. Whereas, the table describes the changes in the...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Earnings
...roportion of values over the same years.Earnings are measured in billions. Overall, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, likewise, regarding, similarly, so, well, whereas, while, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60732984293 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91356434858 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581151832461 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4633864703 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 5.23603664747 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202236590247 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848067780528 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260198273287 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126170054789 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240719512298 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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