In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
People living in the 21st century are dependent on technology and innovation. The same innovation is going to happen in the car industry which results in more demand for cars in the next few years. I disagree with statement provided above. I bolster my opinion based on the following three reasons.
Firstly, a number of cars usage are directly proportional to the population. As the population increases demand for cars increases. For example, the automobile report 2020 states that in past 10 years number of usage of cars has increased by 30% and the population increased by 20% in the past decade.
Secondly, many car manufacturing companies are doing innovations. They are trying to develop better, luxurious, comfortable cars for customers that's why more people prefer advanced cars over any other mode of transportation. For example, Tesla is continuously doing much innovation and launched car with autopilot mode which provides customers good travel experience with safety without any tedious driving work. Moreover, Tesla developed an electric car which reduce dependency on fuel.
Finally, general improvement in the standard of living globally. With more number of high paying jobs and dream of living luxurious lifestyle people will consider the personal mode of transportation. For example, the world family report argues that in the last decade families having at least one car is increased by 25%. Moreover, just like a current scenario of the pandemic Covid-19 which teaches us a better mode of transportation is personal rather than public transportation. In this case, car would be considered as safest.
In Conclusion, on the other side, more cars will lead to more population but considering the above three reasons I strongly disagree with the statement provided above. In my opinion, incoming twenty years the number of cars will increase tremendously.
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Suggestion: that's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32996632997 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92598210669 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2087562499 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9444444444 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198900645769 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646128859209 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619849780336 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114689292755 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502449933328 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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