Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Without a shadow of a doubt, Frienship is an important role in our lives it. Therefore , we have to pay attention how we choose our companiones who will share the life with us. Personally, I believe that have long companionship with a small number of person is better than have a skill of making friends easily for two remarkable reasons.
The first reason worth mention is having a friend for long time brings stability to your life. Furthermore, when you have a strong and long periode relationship with you friend that means that a lot of common things both of you are actually sharing.It becomes easier to express your fellings and talking about your problems with a friend that you konw for a long time. For example, my childhood friend is my best friend we have an amazing and successful friendship. Because I know her since we were kids she knows almost everything about me. every time I face a problem or i want to take a decision she is the first person i talk with her. when we were in high school i was confused which major i should choose for university. After I had a conversation with her and because she knows my ambitious and areas of studies that I interested in. she gave me the best advice which was fitted with my circumstances. This experience taught me that the ability of keeping youe friendship last for long time is crucial skill to bring joy and stability to your life.
Another significant reason I want to mention is that quality is more important than quantity. Having few honest friends is much better than having a lot of friends who are involved in your life easily. Moreover, large number of friends in your life is distracted you from focusing in your life. For example,I read a paper two weeks ago which is a study about how is the number of friends you have will be affect on your social life stability. The paper claims that people who have less friends they face less problem in their life , especially problem which is tightly linked with social life. This paper shows me that successful friendship is tightly with friends themselves not with the number of friends.
in conclusion. having long time friendship is effective more than having a lot of friends not only for removing barriers between friends needs time but also it make you focus more on your future.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-06-03 | sonyeoso | 80 | view |
| 2023-04-10 | KimiaKermanshahian | 76 | view |
| 2023-03-15 | MichelleGAOOO | 70 | view |
| 2022-12-14 | HSNDEK | 73 | view |
| 2022-11-24 | AT2G38040 | 70 | view |
- should universities spend more money for professors 78
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific methods proposed in the reading passage 68
- here are different factors of person s personality which determines success in one s lives The characteristics like hard working honesty diligence sense of humor and intelligence are some traits one should have to be successful 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 3
- should universities spend more money for professors 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mportant role in our lives it. Therefore , we have to pay attention how we choose ...
^^
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...lieve that have long companionship with a small number of person is better than have a skill of m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...things both of you are actually sharing.It becomes easier to express your fellings...
^^
Line 2, column 573, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...bout me. every time I face a problem or i want to take a decision she is the firs...
^
Line 2, column 623, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...take a decision she is the first person i talk with her. when we were in high sch...
^
Line 2, column 640, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...he is the first person i talk with her. when we were in high school i was confused w...
^^^^
Line 2, column 668, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...k with her. when we were in high school i was confused which major i should choos...
^
Line 2, column 695, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... high school i was confused which major i should choose for university. After I h...
^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntity. Having few honest friends is much better than having a lot of friends who ...
^^
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing a lot of friends who are involved in your life easily. Moreover, large number...
^^
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... from focusing in your life. For example,I read a paper two weeks ago which is a ...
^^
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le,I read a paper two weeks ago which is a study about how is the number of frien...
^^
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... the number of friends you have will be affect on your social life stability. The paper c...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun friends is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
.... The paper claims that people who have less friends they face less problem in their...
^^^^
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nds they face less problem in their life , especially problem which is tightly lin...
^^
Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ife. This paper shows me that successful friendship is tightly with friends thems...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...selves not with the number of friends. in conclusion. having long time friendship...
^^
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
... the number of friends. in conclusion. having long time friendship is effective more ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... between friends needs time but also it make you focus more on your future.
^^^^
Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it make you focus more on your future.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63080684597 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52440330562 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476772616137 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7051979979 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6842105263 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300638719709 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943850903405 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071301634511 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201408481844 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242230743371 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.