Most people are becoming overweight. Some say that raising the price of fatty foods will solve this problem to what extent do you agree or disagree.
A large fraction of the population has been suffered from the problem of obesity worldwide. The majority of masses argue that for solving this problem increase the price of fat-generating food is an effective method. I disagree with the given notion and the reasons for supporting my viewpoint are discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, the first and the foremost reason is it would lead to inflation. To make it clear, if the government increases the price of fatty foods, it will affect every sector such as transportation and daily need things, as a result of this locals will have to spend more money on basic commodities. For instance, according to an article published in 'The Hindu', it was demonstrated that in Spain, the government increased the price of packed food for controlling the demand for that food but it also impacted negatively on the inflation rate, it increased by 2% due to this action. Apart from this, the government should promote a healthy lifestyle instead of leaping the prices of food as every food contains fat, health is more focused on a healthy diet and lifestyle as compared to eating fatty food. Moreover, wealthy people will not affect by the high price of food, as they are hooked on that particular type of food item. Thus, watchdogs of government and individuals can solve the problem of obesity without leap the price of food.
On the other hand, the high price of fatty food items may refrain people from adding extra fat to their diet, which ultimately reduces obesity. Additionally, it can decrease the risk of other diseases. To be precise, fatty food is the secondary reason for heart attack and it can be controlled by increasing the price of food, it also results positive for tackling other diseases, which occur due to an unbalanced diet. For example, recent studies have revealed that in India, more than 70,000 heart patients were registered every year and the main reason behind it is the poor diet of patients. Therefore, increasing the food prices can be a good decision from a few's point of view.
To sum up, although the high prices are necessary for improving the health status of individuals, yet other production methods are there for tackling the problem of obesity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91076115486 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65018830406 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524934383202 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3390728195 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.733333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216216502356 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807145769563 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578214280245 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130301732798 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627370269773 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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