Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Whether government should rely on its judgment or should take the requests of the citizens of the society, is a debatable topic. The government is established by the society's people and the government must undertake the requests of the individuals. However, it's not feasible to consider every request of individuals because it will further result in deadlocks or conflicts. Therefore, I believe that the decisions made by the government bodies should go hand in hand with the public.
Suppose the society's citizens demand to build a flyover, while on the other hand, there are several other people requesting something different, then this will result in a clash and it would be incomprehensible for the government body to make a choice. A several-year-long conflict of standing in a Temple or a Mosque at Ayodhya in India is a perfect example that fits the context. Many Muslims demanded the government build a Mosque while the Hindus requested to build a Temple as it was known to be the land of Lord Rama. The government changed during this period, but this issue remained to be a conflict until the correct ones were given justice. This denotes that, the government bodies should circumspect the situation completely and not just undecidedly act and fulfill the public demands.
Shall the government be banished by the public if they do not fulfill their demands? I think not, because it is not the case always that the government will suffice every public demand. If they tend to do so, this would require a lot of time for them to spend on every request that will delay the decisions for several important and ongoing issues. For instance, at present of the Covid-19 situation, already the world is facing several issues related to hospitals, low finance, decreasing GDP, and many more. Now if the public is demanding an unnecessary request then it would not be feasible for the government to indulge itself in these insignificant problems. Rather, it's important to provide people to overcome the more important problems and also to be prophetic to think about the upcoming issues that society might face.
However, the government comprises of the individuals that have been elected by the society members, the government should not be harsh to deny the requests of the individuals entirely. At least the government body should listen to the requests of every person so that they could differentiate the common problems from the personal ones and could act quickly to resolve the most common issues. If they do deny the public requests then, it would evocate the memory of the monarchy and would create prejudices among the people of the society. This will further engender other trivial problems. Hence, it's important that the government and the public should be in agreement and should compromise when it is required.
To sum, the government and the public should be in harmony and should think before they act or request respectively. Otherwise, it would raise unnecessary complications that would not lead to any appropriate results.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... might face. However, the government comprises of the individuals that have been elected ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, at least, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 12.4196629213 217% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79933809619 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452380952381 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 784.8 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6048908441 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203021539137 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707924218322 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504717698624 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132292803512 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414765871115 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... might face. However, the government comprises of the individuals that have been elected ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, at least, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 12.4196629213 217% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79933809619 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452380952381 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 784.8 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6048908441 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203021539137 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707924218322 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504717698624 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132292803512 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414765871115 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.